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I have something for you all to read, but it's really something I need help with. You see, I started writing a story, got through the first chapter and...I don't know where to go with it. So I thought I'd try an experiment. I would like anyone out there interested to help me complete the story. It's sort of a combination mystery/horror/scifi type story. I'm interested to see what directions it goes in with different writers adding to it. You can write as much or as little as you like, and let's see what happens! The working title so far is Plumfield Country, and here is what I've written so far...

PLUMFIELD COUNTRY

(first draft was hand-written in 1987)...2nd Draft 5/10/01...3rd Draft 8/7/06...4th draft 2/26/07

"Well, that’s the story. You can believe it or not, it’s up to you. I gotta get to bed." Jack Quigly hefted his huge bulk out of his rocker and made his ponderous way into the trailer. The door slammed shut behind him and Stella Quigly yelled at him.

"Can’t you ever shut that door quiet? I was about asleep here!"

"Shut up, Stella," said Jack.

Their voices carried crystal clear through the walls in the still night, and since Beau had heard it all many times during the past three days he decided enough was enough. He straightened up from his leaning position on the porch railing and lit a cigarette. The glow of the match briefly clarified his face. It was young and smooth-shaven, beautifully chiseled and almost too handsome. His eyes were an unusual mix of green and blue and many women had fallen in love with them. But after getting to know him they would notice what his eyes really looked like. They were narrowed and cynical. They held the look of a man who believed in nothing until the proof was in his hands. 

He took a drag on the cigarette and walked down the steps into the darkness.

His mind went over what Quigly had told him. Of course, he didn’t believe a word of it. It was crazy. But then, there was the question of what had happened to Yager.

Yager was his partner, his buddy, his pal. They had come to Plumfield Country three days ago for a day of fun and frivolity. Plumfield Country boasted horseback riding, fishing, three-wheeler trails and hiking. For the less energetic there was swimming or sunbathing along the river that ran smack though the middle of the park.

Anyway, Beau and Yager had been dirt-biking it and come across a trail that was closed off. No explanation, just closed. Well, Yager can’t stand it when anyone or anything tells him no, so he drove right through the chain and took off. Beau tried to call him back but Yager didn’t hear or didn’t care. Beau could have followed him, (and looking back now he probably should have) but he wasn’t quite as adventurous. So he headed back to the ranger office to find out whether Yager was in for serous trouble on that trail. The ranger was out. So Beau waited. An hour later he figured he better take the bike back to the guy running the rides so he wouldn’t get charged extra. He asked about the closed trail and the guy looked kinda scared and said talk to Jack Quigly. Beau asked if Yager had come back by any chance. No, he hadn’t. Beau hung around a bit, then went off to the trailer that housed Jack Quigly, owner of Plumfield Country.

And Jack had told him this wild story. The same one he had told him again tonight. And Beau still didn’t believe it. And yet, Yager and the bike had not been seen since.

Beau's meandering walk had taken him to the entrance to the bike trails. The police had closed it off until further notice. They had combed every inch of Plumfield Country, all 270 acres of it. No Yager. No bike. Of course, they had done all their searching during the day. Never at night.

Beau stood thinking a minute longer. Then he took the penlight out of his pocket and nimbly climbed over the chain. He headed for the trail Yager had taken and found it chained off again, this time with a more formidable-looking sign. Beau took a deep breath, summoned up a more adventurous nature, and stepped over into the deeper darkness.

Here the trees hung low and thick, almost obliterating any light that might try to seep through. He followed the trail as best he could, careful of stones and tree roots that seemed to leap into his path. He was aware of the night sounds of frogs and bugs and scurryings here and there, but he wasn’t afraid. It took a lot to scare Beau. He had a feeling Yager was just playing a cruel trick on his old buddy. Yeah, that was it. He was probably sitting in some motel somewhere with a cute chick laughing his head off, while Beau worried about whether his friend was dead or alive. Yager was into pranks, but he’d never carried one this far. Anyway, it was more believable than that crazy story Quigly had told him.

He’d been walking some time when he realized it was very quiet. There were no more night noises. There was no sound at all. His steps slowed. It wasn’t that he was scared, it was just so….quiet. He stopped and listened for any sound and felt the hair on the back of his neck rising. But he wasn’t scared. Just nervous, that was it, just nerves.

And then he heard it. Behind him. A squishing, sucking sound. He turned slowly and looked behind him. There was no one there. He could still hear the sound of someone, or something, walking through the marsh that was by the river off to his left. He swerved his flashlight in that direction and saw a figure emerge through the gloom. It was a man, his clothes torn and tattered, his walk more of a shuffle. Beau put the light on the man’s face and almost laughed in relief. It was Yager!

He didn’t even blink in the glare of the flashlight, and his eyes had a glassy look. But Beau didn’t notice this, so glad he was to see his old buddy. He moved toward him.

"Yager! For cryin out loud!  Where the hell have you been? And Jeesus Christ what have you been doing, you are seriously a mess!"

He was about to embrace him in friendship when he realized Yager wasn’t even looking at him. He was just gazing off into the distance. It was eerie.

"Buddy?" Beau prompted. He waved his hand in front of Yager’s eyes. No response. Beau was beginning to feel the hair on the back of his neck rising again.

He stepped back from Yager.

"Hey, what gives?" he asked nervously. He glanced behind him, thinking maybe Yager was intrigued by something in that direction. He felt the blow on his head the next instant. He saw stars. Then he saw nothing.

When he came to, he was lying on a hard table with a bright light over his head. He tried to move and discovered he was tied down. How long he had been out, he didn’t know. Then he heard voices in the room and quickly shut his eyes.

"I still say we should double our force," said a gravelly voice. "We don’t have enough manpower."

"And what do you suggest? That we simply go out into the street and take our pick?" This from a soft, hissing voice that sent chills down Beau’s spine. It must have affected the other man as well for he suddenly didn’t sound as sure of himself.

"Well, all I thought was..," he sputtered.

"Silence!" hissed the soft voice. "You are not paid to think. Our position is at least safe, if not strong."

A sound of a chair scraping across the floor, then footsteps coming toward the table. Beau squeezed his eyes tighter shut. The action must have been obvious by his captors’ next statement.

"It seems our friend is awakening. Stoner, get the hypo and bring it over here." Beau’s eyes flew open. "I thought that would bring you fully around," said the low voice on his right.

Beau turned his head and looked into bright green eyes set deeply into a thin face. Too thin. The bones stood out almost garishly in the harsh overhead light. The face was smiling sickly at him.

"Good evening. I trust you slept well?"

Beau smiled back. Don’t let him know you’re scared, he thought to himself.

"Like a baby," he said. "Although, I’d like to catch the guy with the sledgehammer." He winced as the lump on his head reminded him it was there. The man smiled again.

"Sorry about that." He didn't sound sorry at all. "It was necessary. What is your name?"

"What’s yours?" Beau fired back. "And where am I?" The man’s faced darkened and the smile went away.

"I abhor insolence. I ask the questions around here. And you must know I already know who you are. Your wallet gave me that info, Mr. Beau Bryant." His hissing voice was beginning to annoy Beau.

"Then you’re one up on me. I still don’t know who you are," said Beau, wondering if the man had taken the one hundred in cash from his wallet as well.

"I am Asp," said the snake-voice. "And as far as where you are, well…" and he motioned Stoner forward. "Welcome to Hell, Mr. Bryant." 

Too late, Beau remembered the man with the hypo.

*****

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Books of interest

Like many people, I love to read. When I was little, my parents signed me up for the Book of the Month Club. I waited expectantly for each new book. When I was about 8 years old I read a book called 'Daddles, the story of a plain hound dog' by Ruth Sawyer.  It was the first book I read where someone died at the end, namely Daddles. I remember walking out to the kitchen where my parents were sitting at the table, tears streaming down my face. 'What's wrong?' they asked. 'Daddles died!' I wailed. Mom had to hold me, dry my tears, and remind me it was just a book. I had gotten so into it that it became real to me. Ever since, I love books like that, the kind that draw you in to a whole other world so that for a time you are there and experiencing what the characters experience.

    One of my favorite authors of science fiction/fantasy is Anne McCaffrey. She writes many different kinds of stories, many of them becoming series. The first time I read one of her Dragons of Pern books (Dragonflight), I decided right then and there that I wanted a dragon of my own! What wonderful creatures they were! When the riders flew on their dragons I felt like I was flying right there with them. Ms. McCaffrey writes all her books that way, from the heart and with feeling. It was also fun to learn that she has Maine Coon cats as I have 4 of them myself. (If you want to see them go to our Maine Coon Connection website)   Anne's son, Todd McCaffrey, has also written some books about Pern that fit in well to the series.

Anne McCaffrey's books 

Todd's books

Another one of my favorite authors is Tad Williams. The first book of his I read was TailChaser's Song, and since I am a cat person I just loved it. The feline characters are quite well done and the fantasy a fun read. 

The next Tad Williams book I read was Otherland: City of Golden Shadow. It was a most extraordinary story, totally different from the first book of his I read, and as it was only volume one, of course I had to go on and read all four volumes. I have since read most of his other books and have loved them all. The worlds Mr. Williams creates are quite unique, and I highly recommend his books. 

Tad William's books

I first read Dragon Prince by Melanie Rawn because, well, it had dragons in it. And I was hooked on dragons because of Anne McCaffrey. But what really struck me about this book was the practice of sun-weaving. People called sun-runners have the magical ability to weave strands of sunlight, starlight and moonlight, enabling them to talk to people at the other end of the light. I'm not explaining it right, but it's a fantastic concept and I was totally enthralled by the story.  I have read most of her books and each one kept me mesmerized.

Melanie Rawn's books

Eragon, by Christopher Paolini, is a wonderful book. If you read the reviews of it by young readers as well as adult readers you will find them quite varied. But I think all in all the book stands on it's own. Considering that the author was 15 when he started writing this story, I think he did a very good job! They have since made a movie from this first book (there is a second called Eldest) and though I haven't seen it as of this writing I do look forward to it.